I recently purchased a copy of Wendy Cope's anthology, 'Two Cures For Love-Selected Poems 1979-2006.
Wendy Cope is an English Poet who delights in quirky, observational poetry appealing to the reader's emotional self. A witty, contemporary poet, she cleverly mixes humour and serious thought provoking moments in her wide ranging works. Wendy Cope also likes to experiment and play with form. I like that very much...
I found myself most beguiled by the poet's treatment of nursery rhymes. In two of the poems she re-imagines these classic rhymes under the influence of master poets like William Wordsworth and T S Eliot.
This sparked an idea and I began to imagine an encounter between John Keats and the legendary nursery characters, Jack and Jill.
Here is the resultant poem:
John Keats Encounters Jack and Jill
Twas the season of mists
When two ascended the hill
To fetcheth water in a pail
One Jack
One Jill
Jack did tumble
Breaking his crown
Resulting in a burning forehead
And a tongue parched
Jill tumbled too
Spilling water extravagantly
And so the hill was emptied of this tumbling duo
And there was not a soul to tell
They were desolate
Their heads and hearts
Duly sorrowful.
Alan j Wright
It is once more Poetry Friday and our host this week is Tricia from The Miss Rumphius Efffect. Tricia's post is quite nostalgic. It presents a poem about the music of typewriters written by Australian poet, David Malouf.
This is SO clever! I love the mash-up, Alan, which has me thinking. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your generous response, Cathy. If it has generated possiblility for you, I am doubly pleased.
DeleteI believe you lifteth my spirits today, Alan! I will see if I can find that book. Thanks for your clever poem!
ReplyDeleteSpirit lifting is such a good thing, Linda. Good luck with your search.
DeleteSuch fun! Thanks for the smile tonight.
ReplyDeleteMy pleasure, Rose. It was fun in the making too.
DeleteAlan, what a clever pairing. I felt like putting the back of my hand to my forehead as I read the drama of Jack and Jill's sorrowful adventure. I like how you were inspired by Wendy Cope's poems. I can see there would be limitless combinations.
ReplyDeleteAlan, today at Ethical ELA, the prompt was to write something classic in the vernacular of Gen-Z. I thought of your post, which is kind of the opposite. I wrote about Jack and Jill in Gen-Z speak here: https://www.ethicalela.com/are-you-down/#comment-99457
DeleteDenise, your follow up actions re-enforce your statement regarding limitless combinations. as well as limitless language appropriations. I like where you took this idea and made it work in a whole new way. Thnaks for alerting me to this fresh development. Such quick action...
DeleteThis is so fun! I especially love "spilling water extravagantly."
ReplyDeleteThanks Marcie. Fun is the key word, no doubt about it.
DeleteHa! This reminds me of hearing Christmas tunes in the style of classical composers during the holidays. A quick search produced this. Enjoy! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IBpmNlAGWi8
ReplyDeleteThanks for the link to follow up, Mary Lee. The possibilities continue to expand.
DeleteHow delightfully melancholic ☺️ love the art too, thanks for all the smiles Alan, great mix!
ReplyDeleteThanks Michelle. Thank Keats for the melancholy mood...
DeleteOh, I so appreciate this, Alan! I needed a little laughter today.
ReplyDeleteKaren, it pleases me immensely that a little laughter visited iself upon you this day.
DeleteAlan, I missed reading your post on Jan. 17th and am delighted to be here again. Your poem is imaginative and witty. Like Marcie, I also like the line, "spilling water extravagantly." I always enjoy your posts so today, I decided to use one of your poems as a mentor text. https://beyondliteracylink.blogspot.com/2025/01/winters-brushstrokes.html Thanks, Alan.
ReplyDeleteHi Carol. Thank you for the feedback. So glad you were able to utilize one of my poems. I shall check it out now
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