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Harvesting Haiku

I was gifted a small, leather bound notebook and it felt right to designate it as a place to gather short form poetry. I have commenced with haiku. I write in this notebook irregularly. I usually find myself compelled by natural phenomena like weather events, seasonal changes and related observations of the natural world. 

I am finding this haiku harvesting contemplative, calming and reflective. It represents a form of limbering up for further writing across my day.  I am in no rush with the addition of entries. They arise when the mood strikes - singularly, or in numbers. My collection stands at 42 and rising. 

So, here is a glimpse of my gathered harvest of haikus.


























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In other news...
It is Poetry Friday and our host this week is Linda Mitchell from A Word Edgewise.  Linda offers readers a Christmas Mash Up Poem combining song lyrics and a poem. 

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  1. Hi Alan & appreciations for a peek at your next collection & these short-form nature notes in Haiku.
    "The beach is friendless" & "whitecap bonnets" especially make me re-visit their moment on the line.
    You are an inspiration for converting my gratitude journal into haiku notes. Thanks so much!

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    1. Is this Tesslyn? This compact journal is such a wonderful addition to my ever expanding collection of notebooks and I am so pleased to have identified its dedicated purpose as a safe landing spot for my poetic thoughts. It recently helped me negotiate a most challlenging time in my writing life. I am most pleased that you found me and appreciated how this delightful book has been used to hold fragile words.

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  2. Alan, love your haiku notebook, including the "Tuesday tempest" line, and looking forward to NOTEBOOK NOTIONS! Mona

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    1. Thank you, Mona. Your kind thoughts are much appreciated. The book is in sight...

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  3. Congratulations for your coming book, Alan. I enjoyed your haiku, feels much like a diary of your days. I like the visions you've brought, like "The beach is friendless" and those bees whispering!

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    1. Thanks, Linda. The book has quite literally taken a lifetime of writing to emerge. so I am quite excited at the prospect of it bursting into the light. So glad you enjoyed the haiku.

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  4. Love blattering rain, Alan. Two years ago Linda B gifted me a beautiful, old volume of haiku from her beloved second hand bookstore. I write when the moment inspires, “response haiku” — to Basho, Issa, and the other masters— in a small field notebook. I don’t I even have 42 yet. Maybe 30– but I feel like a pen pal with these ancient poets.

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    1. It's a great old word- blatter. Ah, birds of a feather, Patricia. What an inspiration Linda's gift has been. Such a great little story. Such great treasure can be stored in a tiny volume.

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  5. Wow! Notebook Notions looks great! And, what a beautiful notebook...I mean the gift before words is beautiful. But, look at how you've given that notebook a soul. Those 'scratchy dancers' of autumn leaves are are a most delightful image.

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    1. Thank you. I have thoroughly enjoyed working with the publishing team on this book. The cover design is fresh and inviting. It's been a buzz. That little notebook was a gift from one of my grandchildren. I remain ever grateful for his thoughtfulness. I appreciate your response-most kind.

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  6. Alan, I love the phrase of harvesting haiku. Your notebook is gorgeous. I am writing a daily haiku. And kudos on your new book! I can't wait to get it.

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    1. Thanks Jone, much appreciated. That little notebook is a winner. I hope you like my new book.

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  7. Count me in as a fan of "the rain blatters down," too. Your haiku make such a good record of the natural world, Alan. Thanks for letting us read them! Congrats on the new book, too.

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    1. Thank you Susan. Another fan of blattering. I appreciate your affirming remarks.

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  8. Your notebook is beautiful, Alan and the perfect place to store haiku. Thank you for the peek into your collection and practice. Also, congratulations on your Notebook Notions!

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    1. Thank you, Rose. I'm pleased you like the home I created for my haiku collection. You know the excitement that surrounds a new book. it doesn't diminish with age or time.

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  9. HI Alan, I love the format of your notebook. It looks like a great place to harvest haiku. It was -9 this morning here in the Wisconsin Northwoods. Today's high is supposed to be -3 degrees F. We are definitely huddling inside today. Thanks for sharing your nature observation with us. Looking forward to the new book, too! Reminds me of a couple Ralph Fletcher put out years ago.

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    1. Glad you enjoyed my dedicated notebook, Carol. Keep huddling inside. Your mention of Ralph Fletcher is apt. His influence on me and others has been profound. I acknowledge this in my book. I have tried to further explore the importance of teachers being visible as writers in the classroom and to influence impressionable young writers through their own use of a writer's notebook. Ralph also has a book due in February. It's about writer identity and I'm proud to have made a small contribution.

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  10. "...blatters" — I love the use of that word, Alan. Your haiku are lovely and it's a delight to peek inside your notebook. And it's so *neat*! Your handwriting is beautiful. Congratulations on the upcoming book!

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    1. Blatters is proving most popular, Karen. Like you, I love it. Thank you for your remarks regarding my handwriting. I am driven by a teacher's remark when I was only five. She told me I should stop writing with my left hand because 'You will never be a neat writer if you continue.' That remark just strengthened my resolve to prove her wrong. I'm a slow, deliberate writer, but I certainly am driven to be a neat writer. Thanks for your comment regarding my new book.

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  11. Thanks for this peek into your dedicated haiku notebook. Great idea! And congrats on your upcoming book!!

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    1. Thanks for your comments. Mary Lee. I'm haiku happy. Thanks also for your remarks concerning my upcoming new book.

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  12. What a lovely notebook and how delightful that it inspired such a bountiful crop of haiku! You've used such powerful word choice throughout and captured lovely natural images. I'm especially fond of those leaf dancers! Congratulations on your impending book birthday!

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    1. Thank you for your affirming comments, Molly. Word choice is like a constantly blinking light when writing poetry, especially, haiku. The book release will be a bit like a birthday. This book has taken me significantly longer than any previous one to bring together. That makes it even more of a special event.

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