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A Fly on the Wall Poem -Alan j Wright

 I am here to share a narrative poem and taking the opportunity to celebrate the frequently heard idiom- ' I'd like to be a fly on the wall.' I had a chuckle to myself while writing this one...

I must come clean here and reveal that Ronny Wunders, a character central to this poem is based on two of my childhood friends. He is a composite of two people and has featured in several of my previous poems. He is what is referred to as a recurring character.  He does some heavy lifting for others who remain anonymous.

There is in fact a real Ronnie Wunders out there somewhere, as well. Allow me to explain...

 Some years ago while walking through a large department store, an announcement rang out for someone called, Ronnie Wunders. I thought, what a great name- and the rest is history. I adopted Ronnie Wunders, in name only!

Ronnie's been having adventures in my poems ever since, along with Cliff Edges, Shirley Birley and others. 

Ah the machinations of a poet's messy mind!










A Fly on the Wall

My friend, Ronny Wunders

Rang me and asked me to come round to his place

I’ve got something to tell you, said Ronnie

-It’s kind of a secret…

 

So, gobbled down my breakfast, climbed on my bike

And zoomed round to his place.

 

Ronnie was waiting at the front door

And waved at me to follow him

He was acting like a character from a spy novel

The day felt strange and it was only 9.00 am.

We went to his room where he closed the door behind us

And began speaking in a raspy whisper

Asking me to promise not to tell anyone

About what he was going to tell me

So, I promised not to tell anyone about something I hadn’t yet been told

Which felt weird

-And then I waited to hear Ronnie’s secret.

 

But before he could spill the beans

I noticed a fly on the wall

I felt I must point it out to Ronnie, just in case

Okay, says my friend

I’ll tell you later when there’s no one hanging around

 

-But he never did tell me his secret

And I now realize flies don’t have ears

So why do people say

Ooh, I’d like to be a fly on the wall 

when they talk about that?

 Alan j Wright


It is once again, Poetry Friday and this time our host is Tracey Kiff Judson who does a deep dive into figurative language with some great insights.

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  1. Ronny Wunders! I am so happy that you snapped up that name when you heard it. Your story sparked my curiosity, so I had to google about flies for a while! : )

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    1. I literally swooped on the name. My wife was with at the time and she saw that mad look in my eye when the announcement was made. It looks like you are caught up in the buzz concerning flies, Tracey...

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  2. As usual, finished off by asking a searching question. And what was ‘the best thing’ before sliced bread?

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