Finding Suitable Endings For Our Poems

The Poet Searches For An Ending

This poem took exactly a year to write! Well, allow me to explain...

I started writing it in the month of August and was having trouble finding a suitable ending, so I put into a folder of unfinished poetry pieces. Almost a year to the day, I stumbled across it again and immediately knew the words I wanted to use. The problem had resolved itself. It serves as a clear example of why writers need to distance themselves from their writing occasionally. A little distance provides a clearer appreciation of the words. Maybe not a whole year though!

Endings are important. It is the final chance to leave an impression upon the reader. We must choose those final words carefully. We need them to make an impact.

Sneaker Look

Discarded sneakers

Scuffed and mangled

Laces frayed

Twisted

Tangled

Both lay rejected by the door

They ‘ll not see action any more

No more housing smelly socks

Running

Leaping

Scrambling rocks

The sole is smooth

Colour faded

Worn out torn out

Dejected

Jaded

And worst of all

On each sad shoe

Is a giant hole

Where a toe pokes through

Their value has at last diminished

Sad to say

Their sneaking’s finished.

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