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Mysterious Mourner Poem

I love the randomness of poetic sparks. I embrace them with enthusiasm. They are a vital life source for poets. 

This idea burst upon the scene while scanning through my twitter (X) feed earlier this week.  Social media can be mirky water to navigate, but if we move quickly past the toxic waste, there is treasure to be found. 

I came across an extensive rolling conversation where contributors were suggesting possible scenarios for a funeral. Humour and quirky darkness kept me engaged. The inventiveness of the contributions was most evident. Brainstorming at its best. Ideas dripping with potential.

So what has emerged from my reading that day is partly found poetry further enhanced by improvisation on text and woven into a brand new poem.

I could not have foretold what would spark my poetic juices that day, but that twitter feed has sparked a poem. I am most pleased to have composed this rather subversive ode to wicked intrigue. It reminds me that we must remain open to possibility at all times...







Mysterious Mourner At A Funeral


I declare I am available for hire

to stand mysteriously

Beside an ancient tree

A short, yet discreet distance from your graveside gathering

I shall carry an umbrella of understated tones

I shall don dark glasses and wear a long black trench coat

And stand spy like 

To add to the intrigue felt by those

Gathered around your casket.


Swirls of mist 

Would heighten the atmospherics

No doubt.


I will steadfastly resist the temptation to place some curious keepsake

On your grave

-for fear it may provoke unwanted questions 

from the grieving congregation.


I could later mingle among the mourners

Hovering on the fringes while using a hushed voice

To utter

Suitably cryptic things to your friends and family

Things like-his life was much like an iceberg, so many secret lie submerged…


Before wandering off and catching a passing bus.

This could be your last laugh

-Your parting gesture...

Let me know if you are interested in taking up this offer.

Alan j Wright

It is Poetry Friday and this week our host is Tricia at The Miss Rumphius Effect. Tricia's post presents a pantoum poem about her dog, Cooper.


Comments

  1. Love the intrigue! And so wickedly humorous. I think this could be an entire movie! It came as a surprise to me that the main character was speaking to the (eventually) dead-to-be. Delicious!

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    1. Thank you, Patricia. Yes, the poem is based on a proposal to someone in the event of their death in order to add a dash of intrigue to the funeral.

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  2. This tickled my funny bone. Thanks for sharing!

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    1. Glad you appreicated the humour of the piece, Sarah. I was grinning during the composing phase.

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  3. This is funny and interesting. I enjoyed hearing about your process. I too like finding the unexpected poems that sometimes seem offered up to us, if we notice.

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    1. Thanks Karin. Well, I felt I owed to readers to unpack the process. The poem presented cold could lead one to consider the whole thing a little bit strange... The spark of an idea was irresisitible!

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  4. Ha, it would bring more conversation than usual if it's a small town. Everyone knows everyone there, and then again, it would be "the talk of the town" for years! It's nice to learn where the idea came from, Alan!

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    1. Having grown up in what was then a small town, I totally agree with you Linda. Thanks for the feedback on the process information accompanying the poem.

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  5. It was fun to read the backstory for this poem . Inspiration can come from the oddest places! I enjoyed all of it, but especially those first three lines.

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    1. Backstory was something I considered rather essential this time, Molly. Glad you found the poem engaging. Inspiration has the quality of quicksilver. we must remain alert and ready to embrace it fleeting spark.

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  6. Good reminder to keep my mind and eyes open for inspiration...even in the most unlikely places/topics!

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    1. Inspiration dares us to look for it, Mary Lee. It is a most intriguing game.

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  7. Oh, my word! Yes, isn't that funny that inspiration can arise from anywhere. I love the idea of this mystery mourner. So funny to image it happening at my or other loved ones funerals. It would surely be a last laugh for the person who died, as well as a long-lasting wonder by those remaining.

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  8. Your poem is delectable, Alan, but I wrote these words from you in my notes - ideas dripping with potential. I'm always on the lookout for those.

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    1. Thank you, Rose. The eternal search continues...

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  9. I'm anonymous above - Rose Cappelli.

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  10. Alan, this is Janice. I found myself laughing at the line where you suggest the deceased's life was like an iceberg, imagining saying that at this mysterious funeral. I should visit social media more often as there are poem possibilities there. I enjoyed this

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    1. Thank you for your kind response Janice. good luck with your searching.

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  11. Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant, Alan.

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    1. You are most kind, Laura. I did have a chuckle as this took shape.

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